It was a long time ago, that which I could never forget, or want to remember; what happen.
Why did I ever go into that house?
What I am talking about is Bella’s house, on Forest Hill Drive number 23. The house is still there if you want to go and see it now.Any way there I was at her front door with my Bro Kieran . “Ding Dong!”
“Yay Jeff and Kieran are here are here with their things meaning they’re staying! ” Shouted Jade to Bella. “Do you know where I can charge my Iphone 6?” Kieran asked with his dull voice. “Sure straight through here under the table.” Bella said reassuring Kieran.
As I slowly walked through the house examining every last bit, but I never noticed Bella had a dog, and there it was leaking on my leg. I had to change already because of that stupid ridiculous dog. As we gathered in the living room with our hot chocolate we watched Waterloo Road at 8:30 pm on BBC 1,the girls were awful, talking forever about the show while it was going on; Kieran was on his phone for the whole time like a some sort of robot, still talking in a weird language, he wasn’t interacting with anyone but that stupid phone. Any way we just ignored him. I stayed with Bella trying to support of her loss,even though I didn’t care about that selfish beast.
Kieran finally got off the phone and started talking, you would of thought he would of died on that phone. “What a night, why don’t we just look at the stars?” Kieran asked.It was already twelve forty-five, and we were still out of our tents gazing at the stars, it really relaxes you.Well thats what I thought it was.
Bella was barely able to say, “Can we go to bed?” I put Bella to bed but me, Jade and Kieran were still outside. All of of a sudden a strong white light beamed from the sky blinding me, not to see the death of Jade. The light from the sky had gone. To my left was Jade who was dead. She had Litres of foam dripping from her mouth, leaving her clod and pale. But where was Kieran.
“Band Bang!!” I realised what was happening. It was Kieran ,he killed the dog, he must of drugged Jade, but why? “OH NO Bella!”
I found him in the tent chopping off Bella’s head, he stopped. Not even looking at me, like he could feel my presents, or able to see through the back of his head. Quickly I ran into the house and grabbed the sharpest Knife I could find and stuck it in the back of my trousers. “CLICK!” It was the door, the back door.
“Jeff come on, I can’t hurt my best friend.
” But you already killed Bella and Jade! But why, we have been friends for years. It must of been that trip, that holiday with your family; you have been acting weird since. What are you?” Kieran walked through the kitchen door, While I was hiding under the table I grabbed his leg; I pulled him to the ground. What happened next scared me for life.
We both stood up, I pulled out the 12 inch knife.
“Stop! At least let me show you the real me.” Kieran shouted grinning.
Kieran or who I thought was Kieran, put the weapon to the top of his head. He split his head open, with not blood but green slime bursting out to the ground. This creature slowly tore off the skin he was hiding in.
“Now we battle!” Kieran explained as he slowly crept towards me.
He dropped over his own slime. That was my time to strike my time to end this.
“No this is my time!” As Jade the one one who I thought was dead, stabbed THE ALIEN in his heartless chest; leaving him squirting out, and putting his body or form all over the kitchen.
I still remember, and now I watch my back and maybe you should watch yours.

July 6, 2015 at 11:40 am
Jethro –
Intriguing writing:
““Now we battle!” Kieran explained as he slowly kreeped”
You mean “crept”, I think, or possibly “creeped”.
I think Kieran also probably has a “dull” voice and note a “doll” voice?
You need a new paragraph at ” All of of a sudden a strong white light beamed from the sky blinding me, not to see[…]”
Have a quick proof read and then finish the piece.
– RP
July 6, 2015 at 3:36 pm
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